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DUDE. SO SICK. :D We need to work on some stuff together :p
Check out my new stuff!

Lockyn responds:

thanks bro ^__^ and yeah we do! I'll check out your new stuff in a bit :D thanks for reviewing man!

Dude, go for a hard electro track. Look up "Hard electro bass" on youtube or something and learn how to do it. d:

DjAbbic responds:

I'll see what I can do :)

Right off the bat I can say you should really add reverbs and delays on your synths (: You'd be amazed how much it'll make the sounds pop. Maybe even on the persussion. Really like the melody though!

I really love the arrangement of the synths, but I was thinking you should focus some more on your drums!
You should really side compress those synths so your kicks pop out more and it'll give the track a really nice vibe. (: But I really love the melody.
Maybe you could send me the notes for the melody and I could do a sick remix. ;D 5/5

I love your drums and your percussion though your synths are kind of on the low side, try and boost them some. I'd add some more synths layered against the main melody so it sounds more full as well, pretty good so far!

GlitchAssassIn93 responds:

tanx! =D

What did you use for those harps? Fantastic!

GlitchAssassIn93 responds:

Nexus on Fl studio 10 =D tanx!

Pretty sick dude. I like the transition from trap to bro step/knife party/delta heavy style. :p

Kicks and snares are perfect and that percussion is amazingly patterned.
And that melody..v GORGEOUS.
And beautiful voice. (: I suggest some more reverb on those vocals, maybe chop them up a bit? and I'd lose the organ but increase the importance of the piano back there. (:

djahmusic responds:

Thank you for the comment, means alot :)

Some pointers!
I really like the dark feel that you creted with this song. The percussion is nice too.
I'd use less bassy kicks that are punchy and high processed snares! (:
Search "Free dubstep kicks" and experiment.
Your bass is quite interesting too, though I like it!

Please tell me how you made that bass. D:

Lockyn responds:

I used a combination of citric acid, household bleach, and dishwasher soap.

Seriously though, I used Sytrus synthesizer in FL to make it. Don't ask exactly how, even I don't know. Played around with saw waves for a while to get it.

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