Really liked the melody along with the breakbeats under the piano, the drop seems quite similar to Sigma's Remix of Hanging on but oh well. :P I think the bass synth itself could be grimier and more in your face if you're going with a harder track. There's much more you could have done like add some melodic synths to go along with the drop or some arps though I like your arrangement of the synths and modulations, you got potential man! (:
Cheers broham,
DeadRewind