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Nice.

I like the beat for this.
It's pretty chill and relaxed as well.
Not much to say!
5/5
9/10

Zandarious responds:

Thanks, as i mentioned above it took a few days to make and had to make matching stuff for it :D

Very good.

Great song.
I loved the pads, melodies, everything.
The one thing I would change is the lead that comes in at 1:10.
I would make it a little louder, and make it sounds a little more grungey/filthy if that makes any sense. Oh and maybe take the reverb down a notch. (:
If only my tracks were as good as this, I want to buy FL Studio.
What program do you use?

Tzunami responds:

Thanks, and yeah, I got tired of trying to constantly deal with this song so I just went with what I've got. Was hoping to give it a surreal ambient feel as well. I'm current using FL Studios and everything it has to offer to make my music.

Wow.

This reminds me of my music...just on steroids. Haha.
I love the "chill trancey" sound" if you get what I mean. It's like in my nature to make it. i'm no good at build-ups, or anything hardcore.
The Melody at 1:10 is almost EXACTLY the same as one one of my other songs. I just forgot which one it was. Haha.
Good job. 9/10.

YakovlevArt responds:

Hey man, i swear i did not copy -hahaha!
Yeah man, I've heard a few of your tracks, they are great. I would say really just keep practicing!
Yeah, builds are hard to make sometimes...
Although I BELIEVE this is one of my less developed (Trance) tracks, I'm surprised how well people are responding to it being chill. I sure as heck didn't intend for it be be like this.
To think: Originally I wanted to make a short loop for TheBoogley.

Teh Lead.

The lead hands down has too much reverb, take it down a notch. (:
And maybe take the bass down on the lead bass, it can get a little distorted at times. Pretty nice track, I do recommend a build-up though.
I anticipated every time the song was going to buildup or drop of, try and use a little bit more diversity when organizing the song. Instead of using the 4 bar 8 bar 16 bar rule ya know? GOOD SHIT YO.

DJPeanutbutter responds:

I meant for the lead to be echo-y, but now that you point it out I see it's much to echo-y ^^' I never heard of that rule. I thought I had a build up in like the middle o.o

Okay.

You must. Give me. Tips.
Program?
Kicks?
VSTs?
I need your help. You obviously have more experience than me.
And house is also what I'm trying to learn.
Maybe you could send me a message of some Tips, and tricks you know of?
It'd be so much appreciated. And in return I could help you with anything that you may need help with. :D

YakovlevArt responds:

hahaha! Hey,
no problem man. Maybe we can do a collab, cuz like i said i like that one saong you did. So through a collab you can see how i work and programs used. I'll just send you a few PMs explaining it =]
Thanks for the score and review though =]

Hmm..

It could be better.
If you arranged the kicks and claps into an organized 1/8 pattern it'd better.
As of now it's just a jumple of 4 or 5 sounds, with no direct melody or lead.
Good try!

vonsallian responds:

thanks mate, its good to have some advice and not hate for a change :)

Scary and Dark.

You succedded in everything you were trying to accomplish.
Makes me scared of twinkle twinkle litte star now.
There were a few key issues I heard, but aside from that good job.

michellellao responds:

Thanks for reviewing this! I'm kinda new to making music, so I'd really appreciate if you can tell me what the key issues are so I can try to prevent them next time.

HOW FUNNY.

I LITERALLY tried to review this right before you reviewed mine.
Haha, but then my laptop exploded. NOW.
Here's what I said...
"Meteor colliding with earth."
That one line set a whole new mood for this song.
I imagine this song playing as destruction and debris lie everywhere.
Reminds of Canon on D.
I wouldn't change a single thing. It's amazing.

auroalee1 responds:

Yeah, i'm not sure how well this music fit with the image of a meteor hitting Earth, but I'm glad I was able to connect with someone. It makes more sence in the video. The music is a very sureal look at the destruction of the earth, instead of the more common, "hard-core" version.

thanks for the high rating. :)

Woah.

So at first I was like this is going to suck.
But then those snares and the bass came in, and I was like WOAH.
I really this.
Reminds me of CAT RATS by Skrillex.
Me likes.It's very unique.

scottwjsm responds:

glad you liked it

Too generic.

I don't understand how this is in the top 10..I don't mean to be rude..
But it's just too simple...you could have added more to this.
I got extremely bored listening to this, I'm sure others did.
Now I'm aware that you made this a loop, but it was just a kick, clap, and a hat.
You should have added more! (:
It's not TERRIBLE just boring and too generic. Add more.
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Mans0n responds:

I'm surprised this made the top 30 as well.

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