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[Raindrop Race [WIP] {Dj-Abbic}]

Dude, go for a hard electro track. Look up "Hard electro bass" on youtube or something and learn how to do it. d:

DjAbbic responds:

I'll see what I can do :)

[The Piano House (DEMO)]

I love your drums and your percussion though your synths are kind of on the low side, try and boost them some. I'd add some more synths layered against the main melody so it sounds more full as well, pretty good so far!

GlitchAssassIn93 responds:

tanx! =D

[TheLotusFlower (Relaxing)]

What did you use for those harps? Fantastic!

GlitchAssassIn93 responds:

Nexus on Fl studio 10 =D tanx!

[Your Mind]

Kicks and snares are perfect and that percussion is amazingly patterned.
And that melody..v GORGEOUS.
And beautiful voice. (: I suggest some more reverb on those vocals, maybe chop them up a bit? and I'd lose the organ but increase the importance of the piano back there. (:

djahmusic responds:

Thank you for the comment, means alot :)

[Burst Fire WIP]

Please tell me how you made that bass. D:

Lockyn responds:

I used a combination of citric acid, household bleach, and dishwasher soap.

Seriously though, I used Sytrus synthesizer in FL to make it. Don't ask exactly how, even I don't know. Played around with saw waves for a while to get it.

THANKS FOR REVIEWING YOU AWESOME PERSON YOU :D

[Kinoh magiK - YODO]

Pretty good! :D
The only Thing that bothers me is there doesn't seem to be any reverb, delay or layering to fill in the void that the track creates. I like your basses and your synths but it would sound fuller if you layered your synths and added some effects. :) Even a light verb on your basses would be nice. 4/5!

kinohmagik responds:

Good shout man I'll remember that for the next one.

Thanks for the feedback

[Antiskill- Sleepless Prev]

I think the cutoff on the synth should have risen slower d: It'd give it more of a progressive feel, but I like what's going on here! :D

YakovlevArt responds:

Oh yeah man, the final is coming a long real nice.
I'll have to update this preview in a short time.

[HalloweenStep (WIP)]

I feel like that intro was somewhat Knife Party inspired. :P I love the basslines in this, and you definitely nailed the Halloween feel with this one. The grawr bite bass really pulls it all together. Really liking it. :D

aaronmusslewhite responds:

I love knife party, yeah. :D They aren't the first to use a long sample based breakdown and they certainly didn't create that minor second horror movie walk thing but I know they were the first to put in dubstep so, yeah I was totally expecting that reference! But since it was a halloween song I thought what the hell itll be fun anyway! I'm excited to see if someone calls me on the other style that influenced this track a bit haha >:P

Thanks I'm glad you liked it! excited for everyone to hear it when it's done

[We could fly <Preview>]

I like the synth at the beginning but I think the chords should be brought out some more. (: And I don't really like the part where it just drops, you should add a tom drum drop right there to fill in that empty gap. (: A sub bass behind that melody would really bring this track together. You should listen to the preview of my Drum n Bass song "Air" (:
Your friendly neighbor, Detious.

LazyBucks responds:

Cheers for the review. Yeah, as I said its not nearly done and theres lots to add. I know, I hated the drop too, was thinking of ways to improve it.
Yeah, I'll have a listen for sure, thanks! ^.^

[Piano Melon]

Love the piano chords, and the Tom drum drop you added, but the drop was extremely lacking. :p add a sub bass or a warm high pitched synth right at the drop and raise the drums on the high ends and it'd be a lot better. (:

kopacetic responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Will use your advice for my next DNB song :D