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Fucking killed it, the swing is tight not to mention the synths and arrangement. The drums are fire too, gimme that kick lol unless you sent it to me already haha.

Look at all these scrubs not rating 5 starts cause it sounds "weird" and "not orchestral."

Take it for what it is not what you want it to be. Fatness 5/5

Xtrullor responds:

Full Kick 05 from Cymatics Terror Drums pack. Layer it with some lousy kick as a background element. You probably have it in the Common Kit pack... you know. The one.

lols at people giving bad rating cause its a troll track

...oh shit

Lockyn responds:

WOW you troll lelelelee

Was this inspired by Au5? Just wondering d:

Dope atrack yo.

Xtrullor responds:

Haha yes. Definitely the new remix of Fields of Grey has a lot of influence in this track.

HAAHH I'm so sorry dude but I can't help but fucking crack up because its bieber xD

Good job <3

Lockyn responds:

;) tenks bb

Fuckin next level, good synths, they're all nice and fat!
The synths in the background are tight.
Good timing and arrangement on the whole thing.
Reallyyyyyyy diggin the synths bro :DD

x3MbeRx responds:

Holy shit! It's Detious music! I'm your biggest fan!

5 stars, and gimme some kicks ya? lol

Xtrullor responds:

Currently building my own personal drum sample collection, will give out as a free pack once I got enough.

About time we get some epic snares too ya?

Awesome track! Trust me man I love me some trance, a lot of my music is really trance inspired. I really like your synth choice and arrangement. The main bell chords are fantastic. The only two gripes I have are that the kick doesn't punch through the mix enough, it's a good selection but it's just not loud enough! The last thing is the guitar, it added a nice layer but the treble is causing distortion, I'd look into it. d: All in all it's a great track andI hope you get those vocals in!

Last thing..

Can I try remixing this? o:

Dj-Gonzo responds:

Thanks for the feedback! :D I give you my permission to remix it, only put a link here, that will be enough. Also if you want the .flp I can give you my email (just if you want to avoid guessing the notes, etc.) It really makes me happy that you want to remix this xD. Send me a PM if you want the email or something else.

Really cool man! The first thing I noticed is that her vocals are reeeally quiet. Could be reverb but I'd work on mixing in her voice a little better, once it starts building it you can't even understand the lyrics. d: You're drop is nice and melodic, maybe layer it with other synths? Try some arps or pads to go under it. I also thought that some percussion in the drop would be wonderful. A wide crash under the kicks with some 1/8th bar hi hats would really make the drop pop. Great start though man!

Dj-Gonzo responds:

Thanks for your review! The vocals are filtered now because we are trying to record two or three another vocal samples to make it look like a chorus (without the FL Chorus FX) when we finish it it will sound loud enough. About the percussion, yes, you're right man, I'm a baterist and I understand why you're saying something like that. Thanks again for this in-depth analysis from my review. And also for the follow! Keep it up, I love your work too.

DUUUUUUUDE. I'm not a fan of the mastering or the drums but that drop was too nuts!! We really need to work on something after showing me that craziness.

Xtrullor responds:

Mastering - I can never get it right lol.

But yeah, sure! Let's do some awesomeness!

Hmm not to sure what you guys mean by "mufflers" d: Do you guys mean compressors?

Anywho the song sounds like you put a lot of effort but there's always room for improvement (:
I think the drums are far too quiet and generic (for dubstep) look around for some better kicks, the snare wasn't bad but could use some body, maybe some verb too?

I thought the melody was nice just not developed, what I mean is you could expanded off that 4 bar melody in like the 2nd verse for some variety (:
The bassline notes are suuuuper generic, there's no problem with that necessarily, it's just been overused xD

The three things I really think you could work on are the transitions, the bass synths and your compression m8! Gotta get the compression down so your tracks don't sound so watered down!

Your transistions could use some work too, like in the beginning there was a piano then it just disappeared and was replaced by bass sounds which kinda threw me off. Also there was a defining build up for the drop which leaves listeners confused cause they didn't see it coming d:

What VST did you make the basses with? Keep refining them until they're super gnarly (:

Keep making music man! -Detious

Hyperion666 responds:

yeah i just finally learned and got the programs for it. I'm using Harmor and Massive for them. I will be practicing more and more, these are just my recent sounds i am playing around with, so i sample them when i am done making them, then use them in future projects possibly if i choose to. But, for now i am just playing around with stuff. Creating cool sounds, you know how it goes. But , about the stuff that was throwing you off, that is just my weirdness. I stray away from the norm A LOT lol, so expect that from me. I was not thrown off when you said that about my work I truly get that a lot. Thank you for your review, it is always beneficial for me.

P.S. the mufflers thing is to level evrything to a point of no ear damage or ear trash i.e. heavy drops without mass melodies just hardcoreness.

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