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[Party Rock Anthem Remix]

The beginning was nice, but the bassline you used was pretty bad. I'm not being mean, it just lacks so much. d: It was just too distorted and gritty. I think everything besides the bassline was okay. (:

skylukewalker99 responds:

Okay, thanks for the feedback. I'm still learning and will be sure to fix the bass drop, as I also felt it was lacking. Please check out my other stuff as well!

[Ring Around The Sun]

To me it sounds quite generic and I think it's lacking fullness. Maybe add some reverb and some delay.
It'd make this sound much better.

Also I would just use a tom drum to replace an actual kick, it's different but I don't think it's necessary. (: Don't be discouraged, I'm just giving feedback. I'm not ripping on it.

Chongo responds:

Hey, any feedback is appreciated, man! I'll keep that in mind in future pieces :)

[KrazR - Deathmatch]

Baha, I think I have that snare. But wow. Those synths are quite nice, not to mention the melody.
The drop was pretty nice as well. That bassline is pretty sick too. I'm just pointing out all the good things because I can't find anything bad. lololol
Good job, keep it up! :D

Bones341 responds:

If the snare was a free download, chances are you do have it too! Glad you like it man, there will be plenty more coming soon! :)

[Waves]

Really digging the synths and melody, but I think the kick and snare are lacking some punch.
I would try a thicker kick and sidechain compress a little more. (If you haven't already).
But I like it. ;D

SierraMadreNightmare responds:

Hey man, thanks for the review. Yeah, its still a major work in progress. The snare is doubled up with a crunchier snare backing now and the kick has has the low end re-worked. Ill be uploading a newer version in a few days. Thanks for the advice. :)

[DubbieDabitZone]

I really love the intro, but I wasn't much of a fan of the extreme panning and the quick filter drops around 1:00. It'd be soooo much better if it had a nice bass and a drop. But I love it!
:D

Dj-MilK responds:

yea main for shizzle))))) i madi it in like 5 minutes haha...will be making a full one soon just for you my lovely fans!!!
-dj grigorii

[Zenit - Into Pieces(BETA)]

I like what what you have going here, it got a little repetitive to me and I think the melody is a bit generic. d: There's a song by Flux Pavillion that sounds exactly like that too which is weird.
I would also change up the LFO rate a little bit on the "yoy" bass. :D

BassTwister responds:

Yeah. Thanks for the constructive critisism! :) It is still a demo so I'll fix it a bit beafore I upload the full version ^^

[Antiskill- Dropship(Loop)]

That's fuckin sick, end of story. If you don't finish this..

YakovlevArt responds:

hahaha, its a loop dude. it never finishes =]

[Norato - Bright as Light]

I love that synth, and I love how simple the lead in melody is, now I feel like your review on my song was a lit, because this is amaaaazing!
I would suggest to bring the kick and the snare out a little more, it sounds like it's drowning from the lead. I think taking the volume down on it should fix that. I know it's a work in progress, but make sure there's variation, transitions, and there's not too much repetition! :D
5/5

Norato responds:

1) House is repeative, if it would not be repeative, it would not be house. SO get over it.
2) Thanks 4 advice about the kick and snare, I will check that out.
3) there will be offcourse more transitions then what u hear so far, final song will have around 4-6 minutes so there is still a lot to do

Thanks 4 review and have a nice day.

[[Dj LC]Viva La Remix]

I really like that plucky synth at the beginning, what VST did you use for it?
I don't have much to say, but that it's very atmospheric and that it flows quite nicely.
9/10, 5/5.

inhstudios responds:

just a simple vsti that comes with the big kahuna of fl studios. sytrus.

[=AnxietyAttack=]

I love the arpeggio at the beginning, and i agree with Aaroca. It was a little repetitive, but it's Trance, what're you gonna do? d:
I think the kick seemed too punchy, and you should cut off the low ends with an EQ.
:D

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

noted, thanks for the review:3